squee!! L!! so cute~ and why you want critique? you just said its a doodle and saw the mistakes >> there nothing to go over if you already know the flaws
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I am 105% sure... that I am obsessed with L.
"No matter how gifted, you alone cannot change the world" ~L from L Change the WorLd
ah i see well then in that case... the lineart is too light so maybe you could try inking it will pen next time, its what i do and the right shoulder is a bit too far out and try making L hold teh cookie .. well L-style XD thats about all i can find ^^ o and maybe shade a lil darker near the hair?
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I am 105% sure... that I am obsessed with L.
"No matter how gifted, you alone cannot change the world" ~L from L Change the WorLd
Okay... this was done on Photoshop... so I'll make the lineart darker... I see what you mean with the shoulder... (I'm horrible at proportions ) and... I know about how L holds things... I just forgot when I drew it and was too lazy to do it over... but I hate that I didn't draw it L like... T~T And yeah I see the shadow problem...
Thank you sooooo much you've helped me a lot!!!
Aaaand one more thing: If I redo this picture, can I just change the file on this one or does it have to be a whole seperate pic?
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and why you want critique? you just said its a doodle and saw the mistakes >> there nothing to go over if you already know the flaws
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I am 105% sure... that I am obsessed with L.
"No matter how gifted, you alone cannot change the world" ~L from L Change the WorLd
the lineart is too light so maybe you could try inking it will pen next time, its what i do and the right shoulder is a bit too far out and try making L hold teh cookie .. well L-style XD thats about all i can find ^^ o and maybe shade a lil darker near the hair?
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I am 105% sure... that I am obsessed with L.
"No matter how gifted, you alone cannot change the world" ~L from L Change the WorLd
Thank you sooooo much you've helped me a lot!!!
Aaaand one more thing: If I redo this picture, can I just change the file on this one or does it have to be a whole seperate pic?
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