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Just a doodle... there's so many things wrong with this... T~T ... ah well... L like-a-da-cookie...

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:iconkagome-misato:
cookies *¬* XD good work L is verry strange and handsome

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xD Thanks... and yeah, he is! :D
:iconkagome-misato:
XD your welcome XD

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:iconbakurasxuriko:
I might be getting addicted to this anime as well as all the other shows I'm addicted to. ^^;

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:iconhindari:
squee!! L!! :heart: :glomp: so cute~
and why you want critique? you just said its a doodle and saw the mistakes >> there nothing to go over if you already know the flaws ^^;

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I am 105% sure... that I am obsessed with L.

"No matter how gifted, you alone cannot change the world" ~L from L Change the WorLd
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:aww: Thanks! And... about the critique... well I mentioned the flaws, but I was wondering if there was anything else that I missed... ^^;
:iconhindari:
ah i see well then in that case...
the lineart is too light so maybe you could try inking it will pen next time, its what i do and the right shoulder is a bit too far out and try making L hold teh cookie .. well L-style XD thats about all i can find ^^ o and maybe shade a lil darker near the hair?

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I am 105% sure... that I am obsessed with L.

"No matter how gifted, you alone cannot change the world" ~L from L Change the WorLd
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Okay... this was done on Photoshop... so I'll make the lineart darker... I see what you mean with the shoulder... (I'm horrible at proportions ^^; ) and... I know about how L holds things... I just forgot when I drew it and was too lazy to do it over... but I hate that I didn't draw it L like... T~T And yeah I see the shadow problem...

Thank you sooooo much you've helped me a lot!!! :glomp: :heart:

Aaaand one more thing: If I redo this picture, can I just change the file on this one or does it have to be a whole seperate pic?

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